Thursday, 2 July 2009

Teacher's comments

In clearing out my room, I found this beauty of a comment from my old English teacher on a page long essay:

'I feel that it would be encouraging your over-conciseness to this short a reply with a high mark, but inconveniently, you interpret correctly. Nevertheless, further analysis is needed.'


Swandive said...

I was carrying out a similar task recently. From a primary 3 report. She suggested that further steps could include 'writing a novel' or 'rewriting the dictionary'. I was 7!

One of my favourites.

David said...

Haha. Amazing. I am quite surprised you didn't take her up on the offer.

Swandive said...

Hey, there's still time.